Thesp wrote:Mafia win condition plus extra:
You are a member of the Mafia with XXXXXXXX and XXXXXXXX. You may talk with your partners at night. Have one person from the group PM me the name of the player on behalf of the mafia. The named player will be killed.
You win when at least half of the living players are mafia, or when nothing can prevent the same.
(Win condition is important on this one. Note the wording. I'm a big fan of the "...or if nothing can prevent the same" language on mafia/SK win conditions, as it builds in "endgames".)
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I see a couple of issues here. One is stylistic (I'd rather say "the named player dies" or "you will the named player"). The other is much more serious -- the VC given allows the mafia to win in non-automatic situations (vig, sk, townie, three mafia, or even the sk, mafia finale). I'd rather have:
Mafia win condition plus extra:
You are a member of the Mafia with XXXXXXXX and XXXXXXXX. You may talk with your partners at night. Have one person from the group PM me the name of the player on behalf of the mafia (if there's a conflict, the majority wins, ties going to the first PM received). The named player will be killed.
You win when all remaining players are mafia, or when nothing can prevent same.
Also, probably make explicit whether notification will not be given those targeted by a Doctor (who prevents a kill) or a Roleblocker (if they have a night choice) (the default is no-notification, but notification is a common variation, and such issues should also be standard in an Open game)